here is my first final image in a banner format. i just split the 1st final picture into 3 parts

with this design i changed the type by deleting the amount of question marks and exclamation marks and the full stops as i felt that is was a little too much. though the design still looks like it needs to be changed. having the type be composited across the page better instead of having the type just spread across the page.  

i am going to add typography to my final images to add more narrative to the final images. i think that this will work well.

i think that this works well to add narritive to the design. i also like how the type looks like it has been scratched out. i did this to show a sense of struggle and torture the child is feeling in this situation.
i will add more type to the design.......just words that add to the narrative to the design such as (hate, why etc.) i think this will communicate the designs well

this is the final with the text added to the design. i chose to use the helvetica font. i think that the compopsition could be worked on to make the work flow better on the page

this is the third design i will have to support my final editorial piece. what i did with this design idea is that i followed the same formula as the other designs but experimented with the composition to add more effect to the design. i put the single images in a ring motion to give the design a different dynamic to it, i also (like the others) played around with the opacity to add depth to the final outcome.

this is my 2nd final image. i basically took the same concept as the 1st final image and used it in this design. the narrative for this design i focused on the neglection side of domestic/child abuse, having the parents taking drugs and exposing the child to that lifestyle. leading on to the child taking the drugs also.

this is the finished more refined design in photoshop layering the images a lot more, around a smoke atmosphere to give the narrative a lot more depth to the design giving off the dark/spooky feel i have been exploring througout my final designs.

Robert Rauschenberg

with this design i like the use of collage and i will consider using this style for a backdrop to aid my final designs

in this design i like the way the bikes are stood up next to each other. this is good because you wouldnt see this on a normal day. it gives the audience intrigue and this is what i aim to do with my final designs.

 in development of my final outcomes i have been looking at alternate ways of showing my final design.

in this alternate i took a look at how the last design was positioned and having a random scatty positioning for the final designs. but in this design i chose to have a more organised positioning of shape and composition. in this design i like how the shape is crowding the design to give the impression of the child being caged inside of her parents abuse. i think that this has a good narrative to it and has a good feel to it.