1st Drawing For Abuse (A5) these are the images that will be underneath the main characters hair. which will be removed to reveal her take on abuse

in this image i have been looking at how abuse has haunted the child visually. seeing the father being abusive to the mother in the design i have the father raising his hand as if he is going to beat the mother. this is good as it communicates the design well and the audience already knows what will happen next (the mother being hit of course)

in this design i took pictures at my uncles BBQ/Bonfire to get this smoke effect. i added the image (above) to the design and layered it and removed elements of the smokey background/foreground to give the foggy/smokey effect. i made the image a lot thicker by duplicating the layers of the smoke with elements removed.

(image of smokey design)

i just duplicated the layers a few more times to get rid of the bottom line.

(improved image)